My first kiss
Cuddled in my mama's womb, inside walls of affection and love.
My mama’s voice was enough for my smile;
I felt her love; her joy was endless.
Motherhood was probably the greatest joy and experience my mother had when the news of my arrival was inveterate to her…..
1st month my cells started developing; I originated that I am “alive”
2nd week my mama made a safe and nourishing place inside her placenta
to help me grow and develop;
my 3rd week, the excitement was the heights for me, my small brain started functioning,
my eyes, heart and lungs begin to form;
4th week; Oh god! My heart begins to beat; happiness and sadness swallow up;
can see my mama not so happy; probably she felt sick….. my poor mama – what is wrong with her????
5th week; my face shows up; she touches my face to let me know that she cares for me.
6th week; I start moving; the 7th week my fingers and toes touch my beautiful mother skin.
Loss count of the weeks; you see I’m a miniature at rest.
heard my doc say -The baby is a girl , she weights ……………….the words weren’t clear.. my parents looked so blissful and satisfied.
my dad kissed my mama as if he won a 9-crore diamond sweepstake. My dad looked handsome (can I whisper a MACHO MAN); my mama looked graceful…..
i stretched out – you see i’m growing man ; my mama, thought i was kicking her – very sad…..; she gently whisper – baby few more days ; wait patiently ‘m yearning to hold you, to kiss your tender cheek, but don’t baby doll…. i heard her voice she called me
BABY DOLL!
My dad was incredibly affectionate to my mum; on many occasion i heard him say ‘ “Sweetheart’ you are gods gift to me; you are wonderful and gorgeous, you…silence…points to me saying “she’s my treasure” my dad loved me – I felt his pride and warmth for me…… he wanted me out….. I spoke to the supernatural being can i jump out please please!!!!!
he was a good planner; he scheduled my feed- i mean my mama’s feed, her tablets, her checkups, her books to read; her knitting kit; her sleep; her walks and what not??? he planned the hospital, the bills, the cradle, the cloths, the jewels, the school, etc., before I popped out.
now I’m 7 months old – gown up & can survive outer my mother’s womb; but the doc was a wretch; she preferred me in, another 2 months,
i became fat and chubby; mama fed me up! its not my fault; a healthy baby i suppose.
The 9th month; the big day, i couldn’t stay in anymore – full-grown, could see EVERYTING – but wait…. just before i broke free something strange happened – it was the kiss, my dad gazed at me; he smiled; touched me from head to foot and he
kissed me exactly on my lips…. This was my first affection KISS. I love you dad.
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Sorry folks if i’ve mislead you with the title…
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Subbuji,
thanxs for your comments, the birth of a child is gods gift to mankind, i'm happy you liked it. Keep coming.... your comments are a great motivation to me.
Opulence
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Our dear Obulance,
A poem with full of emotions and expression on motherhood memories & unborn child's progress in its mothers space and the day it emerges & enters in to this universe, the first kiss by its parents shown with all its realities.
Good show and keep writing...
It's about the unconditional love it recieved right from conceptions to birth & there after upbringing tasks well said within short and sweet lines indeed.
It's the beautiful feelings and happiness to the parental love to their kids.
Yes, those nine months ordeal expressed with such an ease and it's a delight to motherhood memories.
The joy of motherhood fulfills the dreams of life's mission.
It's the Hugs and Kisses
Makes the child to feel its comforts
I watch those moments when you grow
and cherish the tiny moments while you grow
It's time to cheer you up to know what you mean to me only by our unlimited care & love.
That's the beauty of parental love.
Subbu
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Dear Cindrella,
Thanks for visiting my blog & for your comments too. Motherhood is wonderful!
Keep posting....
Opulence
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Bina
Thanks for your comments.....
Opulence
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kumudji,
thanks for your comments.....naughty me
Opulence
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Premsaranji,
Good that i remembered you of your daughter. Children are God's gifts! Thanks a lot for your comments.
Opulence
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Yash,
Thanks for the comments and sorry to disappoint you , hope the brawl between Das and you are sorted out........ LOL.
Opulence.
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Dear Opulence,
The real expression of motherhood..:-) Lovely n expressive writing..
Njoyed reading...:-) You were not tricky...When we actually start reading we have the clue of where you are coming from...
Cindrella
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opulence
that was great!!
bina
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You have not misled with the title. You should have received a slap instead of a kiss for your naughtiness. I got it both from my father and mother. It was not less sweet than a kiss. Very well written and innovative. Loved to read it.
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