My first kiss

Apr 25 2008  | Views 300 |  Comments  (12)
  My first kiss   Cuddled in my mama's womb, inside walls of affection and love. My mama&r... Expand

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  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

 


Subbuji,

thanxs for your comments,  the birth of a child is gods gift to mankind, i'm happy you liked it. Keep coming.... your comments are a great motivation to me.
 
Opulence

 

 



  purefriendship posted 2 weeks ago

Our dear Obulance,
A poem with full of emotions and expression on motherhood memories & unborn child's progress in its mothers space and the day it emerges & enters in to this universe, the first kiss by its parents shown with all its realities.
Good show and keep writing...
It's about the unconditional love it recieved right from conceptions to birth & there after upbringing tasks well said within short and sweet lines indeed.
It's the beautiful feelings and happiness to the parental love to their kids.
Yes, those nine months ordeal expressed with such an ease and it's a delight to motherhood memories.
The joy of motherhood fulfills the dreams of life's mission.
It's the Hugs and Kisses
Makes the child to feel its comforts
I watch those moments when you grow
and cherish the tiny moments while you grow
It's time to cheer you up to know what you mean to me only by our unlimited care & love. 
That's the beauty of parental love.

Subbu



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Dear Cindrella,

Thanks for visiting my blog & for your comments too. Motherhood is wonderful!

Keep posting....

Opulence



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Bina

Thanks for your comments.....

Opulence



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

kumudji,
thanks for your comments.....naughty me
Opulence



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Premsaranji,

Good that i remembered you of your daughter.  Children are God's gifts!  Thanks a lot for your comments.

Opulence




  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Yash,

Thanks for the comments and sorry to disappoint you , hope the brawl between Das and you are sorted out........ LOL.


Opulence.



  Cindrella_king posted 2 weeks ago

Dear Opulence,

The real expression of motherhood..:-) Lovely n expressive writing..

Njoyed reading...:-) You were not tricky...When we actually start reading we have the clue of where you are coming from...

Cindrella



  binagupta posted 3 weeks ago

opulence
that was great!!
bina



  kumud biswas posted 3 weeks ago

You have not misled with the title. You should have received a slap instead of a kiss for your naughtiness. I got it both from my father and mother. It was not less sweet than a kiss. Very well written and innovative. Loved to read it.





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