Each breath I take belongs to her,
Her magical smile lives in my soul,
She is beautiful, dainty and gorgeous;
Her eyes fill my heart with such radiance,
At sleep my mind finds solace with her; for-
She paints my stars thousand aglow,
Hold me close; never let me go
I am yours forever, as the shallow rivers flow,
My heart is filled with warmth and joy,
Each nerve and cell housed with you,
My emotions of submission and pride;
My warmth of love so true.
My thoughts blend within the chambers we share
Just the two of us with no one else there;
Today my life I share with you
No looking back, for infinity through:
My heart, my life is all I have, knitted with worship just for you,
Come to me stay forever; let’s share a life of love together.
I promise my word, a shelter of care, a place for fine rest,
A world of our own, we will live it our best;
With one, two and three the fruits of our love;
An honor of dignity, that’s meadows my life,
You are my everything, I need you forever,
To be my bride, my better half through all eternity.
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Thank you spk!
Opulence
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Yashji,
Thank you for the wonderful comment, sorry for the confusion, but happy you liked the poem. I took 3 hours surfing your blog, enjoyed your visit to Yashji house and the scandals for your wifey. LOL
She must proud of you.
Opulence
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i wanna propose to a gal here
can i take ur lines??
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so you have a guy who proposed to you like this??
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Thats a nice one :)
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wow a submission of feeling by a bride-groom to a bride...... (refer las lines....) Hey guys outhere ......LISTEN...... this is what opulence expects from the hubby !!!!!!
I loved this poem though was confused a bit, in the beginning that why a female wishes such from another female... but in the end I understood the things.....
Great words and the expression is so touching and appears to come out direct from the heart
cheers dear
keep them flowing out
enjoyed it
yashasvi
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Hey Reffy,
thanks for the comments, i'm happy you enjoyed my poem.
Opulence
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opulence,
enjoyed reading your poem...
reffy
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