Crossing Life’s Eternity

Apr 29 2008  | Views 157 |  Comments  (18)
Each breath I take belongs to her, Her magical smile lives in my soul, She is beautiful, dainty and... Expand

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  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Hi Jayem,

Thanks for your comments.... am very happy you liked it.

Opulence



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Hi Bhavana,

Thanks for dropping by.......... happy you liked my poem.

Opulence



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Cindrella,

Nice to hear that my writing has arrested you..... thanks for your comments.

Opulence



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Hey Bina,

Thanks for dropping by....

Opulence



  jayem posted 2 weeks ago

Opulence,

Empathical emotions expressed nicely,
and applies to both sex equally.
Very good. Keep writing.

jayem



  bhavna14 posted 2 weeks ago

tatzzz a beautiful poem.. loved readin it.. full of promises,, love,, care.. wowww... so pure.. too gud.. :-)

Ciao
Bhavna



  akkyg posted 2 weeks ago

very cute and nice poem



  binagupta posted 2 weeks ago

nice



  Cindrella_king posted 2 weeks ago

Wonderful poem..Enjoyed reading...The ended up the poem so well that it conveys what the whole poem meant to be...

You are my everything, I need you forever,

To be my bride, my better half through all eternity.

I am not a regular blogger.. but your writing have arrested me n now i visit this section often...Love the way u write....

Cheers
Cindrella King



  Opulence posted 2 weeks ago

Hey fmjukebox,

Liked your name? Curious to know what is the meaning. Grrrrrrrrr... no issue, you can propose to your girl with the lines from my poem.

thanks a lot for dropping by...

Opulence





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