Each breath I take belongs to her,
Her magical smile lives in my soul,
She is beautiful, dainty and gorgeous;
Her eyes fill my heart with such radiance,
At sleep my mind finds solace with her; for-
She paints my stars thousand aglow,
Hold me close; never let me go
I am yours forever, as the shallow rivers flow,
My heart is filled with warmth and joy,
Each nerve and cell housed with you,
My emotions of submission and pride;
My warmth of love so true.
My thoughts blend within the chambers we share
Just the two of us with no one else there;
Today my life I share with you
No looking back, for infinity through:
My heart, my life is all I have, knitted with worship just for you,
Come to me stay forever; let’s share a life of love together.
I promise my word, a shelter of care, a place for fine rest,
A world of our own, we will live it our best;
With one, two and three the fruits of our love;
An honor of dignity, that’s meadows my life,
You are my everything, I need you forever,
To be my bride, my better half through all eternity.
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Hi Jayem,
Thanks for your comments.... am very happy you liked it.
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Hi Bhavana,

Thanks for dropping by.......... happy you liked my poem.
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Cindrella,
Nice to hear that my writing has arrested you..... thanks for your comments.
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Hey Bina,
Thanks for dropping by....
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Opulence,
Empathical emotions expressed nicely,
and applies to both sex equally.
Very good. Keep writing.
jayem
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tatzzz a beautiful poem.. loved readin it.. full of promises,, love,, care.. wowww... so pure.. too gud.. :-)
Ciao
Bhavna
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very cute and nice poem
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nice

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Wonderful poem..Enjoyed reading...The ended up the poem so well that it conveys what the whole poem meant to be...
You are my everything, I need you forever,
To be my bride, my better half through all eternity.I am not a regular blogger.. but your writing have arrested me n now i visit this section often...Love the way u write....
Cheers
Cindrella King
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Hey fmjukebox,
Liked your name? Curious to know what is the meaning. Grrrrrrrrr... no issue, you can propose to your girl with the lines from my poem.
thanks a lot for dropping by...
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